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Tuesday, 27 October 2015


Pow! Zap! Boom! My brother Theo was on the Xbox and I wanted a turn.
"Theo it's my turn on the Xbox," I announced.
"No it isn't," ordered  Theo . He  probably knew that his turn was up but was just being a hog.
"Yes it is, even mum said," I snapped back with a look of annoyance on my face.
"But I don't want to," he groaned with a stupid look on his face.
"Get off!" I shouted with a stern look on my face 
"Fine!" shouted Theo while throwing the controller to the ground.
"That was my 80 dollar controller," I exclaimed with a look of horror 
"No, not mum," Theo shouted with a look of desperation.
Good old mum, she always sorts things out.

1 comment:

  1. Ha ha! Very funny! I'm sure my Mum will be very helpful when Iris is older! I like the words you used like 'announced' and 'ordered' and 'desperation'. It does not remind me of anything yet, but it sure will in a couple of years! Very cool story Elliot!