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Tuesday, 8 March 2016

Lollie land



Sugar mounds lay everywhere,
only seconds ago they were
cars and bikes.

Hills freeze 
and instantly become
rock candy.

People run around screaming 
louder than elephants,
panicked as they slowly  
 turn into gummy bears.

Trees wave there 
delicious leaves 
at me.

Food mysteriously turns into
the lolly version of itself,
as it hauntingly calls for me to eat it.

by Tanya Schultz


Lollie land Reflection 

I am learning to use metaphors instead of similes.
I am doing well because found a picture and because I understand how to use metaphors.
My next step is to use metaphors that connect well with the







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